2014년 7월 10일 목요일

Final Essay

Final Essay
 2012310890
 Won Ji Hye

Each people have different opinion like their looks. . The word “opinion” means that is what they think or believe about something.  As human, all people have a right that they can claim their opinion if their opinion is wrong or not for other people. Sharing opinion with other people makes us to enlarge our experience and knowledge. My essay will range over 3 blogger’s articles. I will compare my opinion with 3 bloggers’ opinion on same topics on articles covering government intervention. The government step into policewomen’s uniform in Russia in first article, life of human in second article, and drinking habit in office in third article.

The first article is “Russia Bans policewomen from wearing too short skirts.” from Cho Hyun-Jae’s blog. His opinion is that Russia’s decision is right because policeman should keep their looking clean and uniforms should be effective to catch criminals. I can’t agree his opinion totally. The duty of policeman is not only catching offender but also doing many things such as levying a fine of the traffic regulations or other rules, and helping people to solve severe problems in society. It’s okay that policewoman wear too short skirt on their choice if they feel comfortable because skirt looks tidy and attractive. This is same thing that stewardess who have lots of activities on their work in flight wear skirts. Therefore, in my opinion, there is no need to ban policewoman from wearing too short skirts. It is a matter of their choice.

Next, I chose Seung hwan’s article about that Peruvian police and soldiers given ‘license to kill’ protesters 5 years after Bagua violence. Seung Hwan thinks the behavior of government is incorrect because protest of native is very reasonable. I am almost of a mind with Seung Hwan’s opinion, a little difference of my opinion is that killing people is incorrect if their protest is reasonable or ‘not’.  Because the government is made by people, government should provide security and peace for all people. It is ironic that the government that should have to protect their people uses armed force even killing their people. And in this world, no one can have right to decide whether another human lives or dies like license to kill.

Lastly, I selected Da Sol’s topic about “France allows employers to ban wine in offices”. From his writing, he supports decision of France because he thinks drinking is bad and some regulations are needed to people to control amount of drink. His opinion is contrary to my opinion. If they can drink, they are adult, not child. Adults should have to face up their responsibilities. There are no one drunken who know that if they cannot do good work, they will be fired. Therefore the government intervention is not necessary whether they are drunk or not, healthy or not, and mentally well-being or not in their office.

As a conclusion, I can see that there are a lot of things happen around the world, how people react, and there are many different opinions. I selected these three articles because these are dealing with a common subject about the government intervention. On these same articles, my opinion is dissimilar to Hyun Jae’s, Seung Hwan’s, and Da Sol’s. In first article, Hyun Jae consent about banning policewomen’s short skirt in Russia, but I do not consent because it is a problem of policewomen’s choice. In second article, Seung Hwan’s opinion and my opinion about giving license to kill are similar, with one difference that I am totally opposed to kill people if they are wrong or not. And in last article, Da Sol is favorable to banning wine in office but I am not because it is also individual’s matter. I think the government intervention should be minimized but their opinion is distinct. By sharing opinion with them, I can learn the fact that other’s opinion cannot always same with my opinion.           

Source:-

1a- Cho Hyun-Jae, “Russia bans policewomen from wearing too short skirts”, Current Event Summer Class 2014, Blogger, 2 July 2014, Web, 2 July 2014.

1b- Johnlee Varghese , "Russia Bans Policewomen from Wearing 'Too Short' Skirts", International Business Times. © International Business Times, 26 June 2014, web. 1 July 2014


2a- Lee Seung Hwan, “Peruvian police and soldiers given 'license to kill' protesters five years after Bagua violence”, Current Event Summer Class 2014, Blogger, 2 July 2014, Web, 2 July 2014.


2b- Lizzie Dearden, "Peruvian police and soldiers given licence to kill protesters five years after Bagua violence", THE INDEPENDENT, 30 June 2014, web, 1 July 2014.


3a- Lee Da Sol,“France allows employers to ban wine in offices” , Current Event Summer Class 2014, Blogger, 7 July 2014, Web, 7 July 2014.

3b- No publisher name on web, "France allows employers to ban wine in offices", Agence France-Presse, 3 Jul 2014 , Web, 7 Jul 2014



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